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   3 Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
3 Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare

3 Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

 

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   It is getting easier to cook food due to competition between food companies that are trying to have high market share. As a result, woman, especially woman as a mother of one family has been influened by this development of food making method. Now I am showing what this improvement of making food change people's life.

 

   Fist of all, easy way to make food afford mother enough spare times for them to do what they want to to. I means that they can save the time to prepare food which took long time before improved way to cook. Well prepared food source just need water and heat. Thus, mother can finish their job more quickly than before. This benefit enables them to spend their time for their own development like exercise, study or education for their children.

 

  Moreover, we can choose more various dishes we want to eat at breakfirst, lunch and dinner. Choosing another dishes diffrent from others who are living together is no longer a big deal. Even though it was a selfish and annoying asking to a cooker because it dind't consider the effort of a cooker, it's now seem to be a little bit cute problem to a cooker.

 

   Development of method to make food has changed our lives. Due to its efficiency, we can get more time to do other meaningful things and are allowed to get option to eat different food from other families. Easier to make food, more changeable is our life getting.

 

 

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   It is getting easier to cook food due to competition between food companies that are trying to have higher market share. As a result, people, especially woman as a mother of one family has been influenced by this development of food making method. Now I am showing how this improvement of making food changes people's life.

 

   Fist of all, easy way to make food affords mother enough spare times for them to do what they want to do. It means that they can save the time to prepare food which took long time before this improvement. Well prepared food sources just need water and heat. Thus, mothers can finish their job more quickly than before. This benefit enables them to spend their time for their own development like exercise, study or education for their children.

 

  Moreover, we can choose more various dishes we want to eat at breakfast, lunch and dinner. Choosing another dishes different from others who are living together is no longer a hard work. Even though it was a selfish and annoying asking to a cooker because it didn't consider the effort of a cooker, it now seems to be a little bit cute problem to a cooker.

 

   Development of method which makes it easy to make food has changed our lives. Due to its efficiency, we can get more free time to do another meaningful thing and are allowed to get options to eat different foods from other families. Easier it is to make food, more changeable our life is getting.




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